rate_review Reviews

Loved all that tension! Keeps things interesting ne? Thanks for updating, I was really excited to see that you had, and of course great story as usual.

Wow! I wondered what happened to this story. I've missed a bunch. You are such a tease. I'm breathless in anticipation. Sango's internal dialogues are so funny. You have great wit. I enjoy that and the limes so very much. Naraku gives me the shivers. Through this whole story, I've worried about the two getting found out. I'm still wringing my hands. Oh, Inuyasha's speech was so funny! How sweet that he played along. Miroku certainly has a good friend there. You described Sango through Miroku's eyes so well. I have a bad feeling we haven't seen the end of Naraku. Miroku did a great job on him. Oh, Yeah. You have written this beautifully. And teased us beyond what is bearable!!!!! Great job.

Hanyou Slave aka Snowfall

omigosh! that was awesome! IVE BEEN WAITING FOREVER! YESH! miroku laid it on him hard, it was like naraku got knocked upside the head with boulder the size of his ego! dude, that man is such an ass! I HATE HIM! ID BURN HIM ALIVE AND FEED HIM TO MY EVIL KOI (it eats anything, i swear!) oo, will miroku confess to her in the next chapter? U MUST UPDATE AGAIN! I MUST HAVE MORE! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!

Please update soon, I really want to know what happens next.

I am really loving this story. The way you handle the characters in each of the situations they end up in while keeping them as in character as they can be in an AU is great. I love writers who can pull this sort of thing off without making the characters unrecognizeable.

The only thing I have to comment on is the spelling of certain words/phrases. "Come on" instead of "Common" and "heel" instead of "heal" are the two I remember jumping out at me, but it's not a huge deal as certain words just bug me when spelled wrong. But honestly, other than the very few mispellings, this story is really enjoyable and I can't wait to see more of it, :)

OMG!!! A cliffhanger... Darn it... I won't be able to sleep... update soon!

ahhhhhh..... please update!

I'd love to give you some concrit on this, but I can't seem to come up with anything much... well, apart from some mixups between gentle and gentile in earlier chapters. But, anyway, I just have to say... MORE! Please! I need another chapter now! Oh man, you're so evil to stop there! Please please please keep writing!

GO NEBRASKA!!!!

Well. That was my patriotic moment of the day. *sigh* Can I hep it if I live here?

Me likely. Write more.

Sorry, it's like 1 AM. This so deserves a better review, but... my brain died like three hours ago.

An excellent piece of work! Well written and an interesting premise. Definitely looking forward to more!