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Well, if you are going to do the cliche plans first, the next should involve bathing.

Up-date, plzzzzzz! :I

I agree that Inuyasha is never going to make the first move but 8 years! What was Kagome waiting for? Divine intervention?

ohhhhh UPDATE!!!UPDATE THAT BITCH!

funny and hot, I want more

ohhhhh i really like it!! update!!!!!!!!!

Yeah, Imma need you to come in on saturday.


Or more chapters. Some sentence structure is awkward, but over all a solid story.

This is very very funny. However, the sentence structure or punctuation can be confusing at times. I am enjoying it though and look forward to your next chapter.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave

wow...i have to agree with Kagome in wondering over inu's perference ...or lack there of. how long were they living together and just why did he build her a hut if he did not intend to populate it? the two times they had contact, in which you have stated, were in times of drunken stupors and in light of a grandfather's proposal? HMM. makes me think.... eep!!! talk about things that make you go bleh. ":-X great story so far though, you keyed my intrest on it. go Kagome...get what you want. LOL. keep it up!

Wow. This is great. I love it. It's so hilarious and you definitely have a way with words that is very hard to come by in the fanfiction universe, so kudos to you. I really love how you put a sort of humor into your story and even though your prologue was disappointingly short, I was really looking forward to more after I'd read it. First chapter was great as well and it gave me a sort of background before going onto the real story. You did a GREAT job so far and I'm very much looking forward to your next chapter. And that chapter will be coming out soon... right? *wink wink* I hope for my sake and your other readers' that writer's block finds a home in some other writer.