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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nothing wrong with a litle Striaght shota now and then is there? i'd like to see this pairing more often.
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey you, long time no see. My fault, of course. I have let new obsessions and pasttimes drive me away from the poor fics I started and have yet to bring to their chilling conclusions (whatever those might be.) And, perhaps more regretably, I am way behind in reading the updates to the stories that I found so interesting and well-written in my fanfic days of yore. But I am very glad I took a trip down memory lane and discovered you had written another chapter as I hoped you would!
You are a fantastic writer with truly original ideas and I certainly hope you continue to explore this talent! I still have goals of one day updating the poor fics I left hanging. Unfortunately, that may take place first on the fics I have on my other penname. But with readers like you wanting more, how can I resist? Still, it is a slow process for me especially since it means doing a lot of rereading at this point.
I hope you don't mind that this review served a dual function as a response to your review and to your chapter. I certainly didn't mean to overshadow your update. I thought it was well done, and I look forward to more!
You are a fantastic writer with truly original ideas and I certainly hope you continue to explore this talent! I still have goals of one day updating the poor fics I left hanging. Unfortunately, that may take place first on the fics I have on my other penname. But with readers like you wanting more, how can I resist? Still, it is a slow process for me especially since it means doing a lot of rereading at this point.
I hope you don't mind that this review served a dual function as a response to your review and to your chapter. I certainly didn't mean to overshadow your update. I thought it was well done, and I look forward to more!
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, I loved reading this story again and I really hope that the editing work will lead to even more of your great story.
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You see, I came and read and I must say you write very good!
If you really want to beta it for me then I think it could work.
If you want I can send you the chapters tomorow, just tell me.
Suryallee
If you really want to beta it for me then I think it could work.
If you want I can send you the chapters tomorow, just tell me.
Suryallee
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Please update soon.
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me you will keep going on this fic. I love Kagura soooo much. I put myself in Kohaku's place in that fic. That was fun the way she tortured him in her dreams. Maybe she can make it a reality.
A 5 out of 5.
A 5 out of 5.
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter love how in her dream kagura was a goddess and kohaku was the offering loved how she tortured and dominated him i'd love to be him keep it up
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a very good story short sweet and to the point.
that reminded me of a song called mrs. robinson. you may
be too young to know what i am talking about but you did a
wonderful job.
that reminded me of a song called mrs. robinson. you may
be too young to know what i am talking about but you did a
wonderful job.
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. i never would have thougth of this pairing. this was really different and cool.