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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love how you’re incorporating in the POV’s and interruptions, it makes the story telling more real. I just finished now, and I’m really enjoying this story. It has a lot of potential and is very emotional at parts. Though there are several spelling or grammatical errors, I can still comprehend what you are trying to imply. Please keep writing this story, I don’t like cliffy’s too much. Keep up the good work^__^!!!
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
to short
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. its funny and verey diffrent. so keep up the good work.
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay the tape line was very funny I didn't see it coming.
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you've captured Inuyasha's temper perfectly!
I love it!
I love it!
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One word:::::UPDATE!
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TY
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TY
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is very promising but instead of using that POV thing you should like use (*) or somehing like.
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I rather like the first chappie. So far its interesting. I would appreciate longer chapters, though and probably we can write more reviews when the plot becomes clearer. ;)
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool glad you are the same person LOL. Someone borrowing other peoples stories is one of m pet peeves so I wanted to make sure. Please keep writing I look forward to updates.
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its interesting...very interesting!