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for Toying Around

by dragonlorelei

person Lenn
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have so got to update I totally loved the story. The only constructive critisism (ah I can't spell!) I have is that Inuyasha is kind of acting out f charector and although we already know, you havn't described what any of your charectors look like. I seriosly hoppe you update cause I will defintely read
person gittelbug
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was great. i can't wait for more!
person Fallen_angel
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool first chap. Great writing. Will definitely continue :)

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person Mystic Hanyou
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great. Poor Inuyasha. A doll. Man that's sad. So what will happen now? Update soon, later.
person DRAKE220
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh that was funny! hahaha!!! much better then the other two chapters! inu was more himself and kagome was more entertaining! i am DYING to see how miroku is going to take this. i mean if anyone can give inu some interesting 'how-to-be-a-guy' rules, it'd be miroku.
person gittelbug
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is really cool. keep up the good work! ^^;
person Zelix
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ehehehe.... hahahha... oh boy, this just keeps getting better and better, really good stuff you got here!
person gv
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this intreges me...please update so i can reed more...PPPLLLLLEEEEAAASSSEE..........
person Nocturne22
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is definitely something new for Inuyasha fics. I think you can turn this into a really great story so please update and write as much as you can! ^_^
person Sassy Chan
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really like it! I never seen this idea done before, it's really nice! Please continue!

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