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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kch, this is funny. Nice job! Spelling seems a little off at times but who am I to complain? Doesn't really matter to me anyway cause I like the idea. ... I wish I had an Inuyasha doll too...
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I await the next, so until then,
keep up the great work!
Claire ^_~
keep up the great work!
Claire ^_~
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man. i'd be driving myself to a freakin doctor! "i've lost it! i haven't had sex in forever, and i've finally lost my mind!"
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
horrible HORRIBLE movie. tayra banks was in it and it was mentally stuprifying. however, this is a cute story.
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha. If this isn't an original story, I don't know what is! Very interesting. THis is such an amazing plot, so please don't screw it up *lol*. But from your first two chapters, I can tell that your a great writer so I think I'm in for a fantastic story. Keep up the great work :)
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL!! This story is rlly cool, PLZ update soon! Constructive Critism: Inuyasha is a bit OOC (Out of Character). Maybe you could make him a bit more...Inuyasha-ish? Like, fighting and being a smart ass all the time? Just a thought
~sexykagome03
~sexykagome03
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP! that was hillarious. I fell off my chiar *blushes shamfully*. if you don't update soon though bad things will happen to a good author if you know what i mean ;) j/k. but please update soon...i want to know who the pretty man is!
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please continue it sounds great so far
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey this sounds cool. update soon.
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoo, this is VERY good and EXTREMELY interesting! Update soon, this one has SO much potential and it is funny too, good work!