rate_review Reviews

It's amazing!
I love this pairing!

This is a good draft for a story, but it doesn't sound complete. Some tips: look out for run on sentances. You have good visual description but almost nothing to appeal to any of the other scences. An interesting start, do you think you could tell us, just in little snippits how they came to love one another?
Good luck writing!

I like it. Even though I hate Kagura. Hope to see more stories soon. I'm trying to starting a new one but I can't stop reading long enough to write anything.(lol) Good luck.