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for Breaking Control

by Mirokuslave

person mirsanforever
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! NEED MORE!!!!!!! that part were they were thinkin to themselves was so sweet! this is such a great story!!!! now,if only a certain monk named miroku would lose his control & sanity while a certain demon slayer named sango was "toying" with him in his sleep,having lost all lust-filled sanity, woke up and pounced her...........hmm..............
person Biteswhenprovoked
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i like this one. i love sango and miroku fanfics its kinda hard to find good ones. oh yea with that 'ive never been close enought to breath down a neck' comment i think you got the closest to inuyasha that i've read in a long time.
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey ya, why aren't you updating. i like your idea. you should go with your story. there are probably many people who want to read this. please update
person Smarty-0016
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i like this story and the end of chap 1 was dramatic. i think you did a good job with choosing the main idea of this story. hey i want you to update!
person Hentai Wolf
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's been a while since i read a good angsty miroku/sango fic. this seems like it's going in the right direction. you've gotten the characters pretty much down, you just need to continue, i have faith that your work will be sucessful. if you need any plot ideas, or just want to bounce an idea off of me, feel free to e-mail me; i'm not too great at writing my own, but i am good at coming up with ideas. and yes, that is my real e-mail address; it's a nickname of mine from school.
~Wolf
person Anon
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good summary, i'm excited for the first chapter...
person ladeekiSz
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woah baby! lol this story rocks! i love the way you started it and i just can't wait till you get another chapter up. I'll be waiting for it.
Till then i guess! ^_^

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