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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOO FUK YEAH DIS is good it go dumb man
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your doing ok, grammar is a bit off,
that's ok, I'm no better
that's ok, I'm no better
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love the plot! your OC seems good, but you might want to work on your grammar... or something.. the writing is a bit off... i'm not sure what it is... maybe you could get someone to read over it for you! ...maybe it's the tenses... anyhow... my mind is gone... its finals week...and this review keeps getting crappier..and crappier... update soon
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This seems predictable enough.// Remember: commas are your friends.