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wow. this is a really awesome story! i cant believe poor sesshy fell for naraku like that....i hope inu will treat him better T_T update again soon!!!

Aww! I loved this. Though I have to admit, I was having trouble seeing Sesshomaru so weak. Please say there will be more?

And here I thought this version would be happier. Poor Sesshomaru. I eagerly await your next update.

Boy it is impossible to decide which version is better... that was good ...damn good!!!

I'm actually disappointed that Naraku was using Sess. I knew it but it would have been nice if there were some feelings somewhere. But good for Sess for realizing that his dad was using him. Poor sweetie evrybody is using him and he is sick of it.

So angsty, sweet, sad; oh just everything! I really like how you have portrayed Naraku so far. It is very different seeing Sess uke. Anywho, looking forward to the next chapter.

Snowfall

i really enjoyed this. I hope u don't quit or stop halfway.. cuz i would sooo suffer for it. i can't wait to read more. i hope inuyasha comes back into the story though. i want to know what his motivation, or well, true feelings are. initially, i didn't think i'd like the naraku bit, though after i read it, it wasn't half bad. though i feel like naraku is not exactly likely to 'really' care for sess. well it's just the way i see him. but, i suppose at the same time i feel like sess is in need of some tenderness so hey, if somebody's gotta be nice to him, why not.

i also like the way u portrayed sess, cuz i think it's believable and he is sorta matter-of-fact that way, u know? i realise i soo enjoy reading first-person narration. and the whole present tense thing seems to work too. so don't stop writing. waiting for new chapters is one thing, but i am so afraid of writers stopping their fics halfway when i really enjoy them. so whatever u do, i hope u don't stop this story altogether anytime soon :)

i think you want to write more now. no, wait, scratch that, i *know* you want to write more now.

I am really enjoying this story. You uses words wonderfully and your characterization of Sesshomaru is excellent. Although I love the Inuyasha/Sesshomaru pairing, I equally like the Naraku/Sesshomaru pairing and the way that you are writing Naraku is letting me know why I like the pairing so much. Maybe you should do a alternate ending for the Naraku/Sesshomaru lovers out there, but if you can't that's fine. Just continue soon. *Big happy face*

oooohh.... so i went and read both versions... and i think i like both. ^^ lol. i write Naraku both ways, so i mean, why wouldn't i? *grins* and you wrote both sooo beautifully... specially those tentacles.. man... that was.... so awesome........ and this one.. even though it was.. much more... well, waff-y as you put it, it was really well written from both their stand-points. and i swear.. if i could think... and type properly.. *LoL* i'd leave you a better review.


Later, hun!!

Ra