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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your first chapter has more shout outs than story. Your chapters should be longer
schedule
May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to see where this is going :) So far it sounds interesting.
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ummm im pretty sure i LOVE THE STORY KEEP GOING!!!! and also im your first reviwer well bye
keep up the good but i suggest you make the chapter's just a bit longer
you know what.....dont listen to what i said about making you'r chapter's longer
i make my chapter's pretty short too so any way
keep up the good work e-mail me sometime thanx bye....oh and UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_~
keep up the good but i suggest you make the chapter's just a bit longer
you know what.....dont listen to what i said about making you'r chapter's longer
i make my chapter's pretty short too so any way
keep up the good work e-mail me sometime thanx bye....oh and UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_~