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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice start! I look forward to reading the rest.
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You've intrigued me, but do remember to use a spellcheck or a beta reader. ;)
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, very good start, very good indeed... you have a potential story here, take care of it and i'm positive it will blossom into something wonderful, keep it up!
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy crap that was creepy yea thats what i like to read lol please if its not to much trubble UPDATE SOON!!
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Little on the short side, but it shows promise. I'll follow.