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for Bad boy meet's bad girl

by sutekii

person whey
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What worked? What happened to your other story? Chapter 8 was "xxxe-rotic" and it included an invitation to dance... Eh?
I doubt you'll get people coming back to this one (in a positive way) without putting up more in a chapter. A few sentences is not a chapter. 700 to 1,000 words is a chapter. Count them.
Don't make people think you've wasted their time.
person Egyptian Kiss (not logged in)
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey not a bad start. Please update soon. I really like your theme. EK!
person nowhgoihre
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
was that a story or a sentence? if you don't have time to write more, don't waste time posting junk like this.

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