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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I first read this over at the Undying Devotion site and I thought it was a shame I couldn't leave a review there as I thought it was really good. I really think you get the characters and the relationship between them well.
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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ADORABLE!!!!!! I loved it, really. Beautiful work.
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i liked it, many smutty yet romantic hints 4 the next chapter. *rates 5 and goes to next chapter*
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May 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bankotsu? Uke? NOOOOO!!! So not right, I mean, uke? I've always seen Jakotsu as uke, being all girly and kinda the way he walks would give it away?
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic was so beautifully written.. *starry eyes* You kept the characters in their original forms, making this story believable and flow easily with the Inu-Yasha series. (^_^)b And I'm impressed with your knowledge about the clothes that Japanese people wore in ancient times! Hahah.. That must be hard to research...
Anyway, I love the way you weaved words together.. *(^o^)* In particular, my favourite clauses are, "Bankotsu’s sapphire eyes spoke volumes, apology, wistfulness, and lastly, a promise for later compensation," and, "he kept the ivory body close while his other hand intensified its harassment." The words "compensation" and "harassment" really stood out to me.. I think everyone should say and act on these words more often -- like, on a daily basis!! (^//^;;)v Hahahah.. It would be a great and wonderful world to be "compensated" and "harassed" by someone as hot and sweet as Bankotsu..!!! *more starry eyes*
Excellent job!!! I'd love to read another Shichinin-tai fic written by you!!
Anyway, I love the way you weaved words together.. *(^o^)* In particular, my favourite clauses are, "Bankotsu’s sapphire eyes spoke volumes, apology, wistfulness, and lastly, a promise for later compensation," and, "he kept the ivory body close while his other hand intensified its harassment." The words "compensation" and "harassment" really stood out to me.. I think everyone should say and act on these words more often -- like, on a daily basis!! (^//^;;)v Hahahah.. It would be a great and wonderful world to be "compensated" and "harassed" by someone as hot and sweet as Bankotsu..!!! *more starry eyes*
Excellent job!!! I'd love to read another Shichinin-tai fic written by you!!
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what an awesome story!! I loved it so much, your awesome a wonderful wonderful writer, I also loved how you did't make there relationship only about the sex but also about them truly loving each other..... it was great. :D
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh that was nice and steamy ^__^ hooray for hot and angsty sex scenes :p there so needs to be more jak/ban fics! yours is an excellent one! thank you so much for writing it yay!!
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kool
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i luved it although id much rather see m/f pairings as im not one for gay pairings but my computer screen is steamy! keep goin
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Giggles* The thought of Jakotsu sneezing like mad is such a riot!
*Gives you cookies* You kick so much as tarea!
*Runs to next chapter*
*Gives you cookies* You kick so much as tarea!
*Runs to next chapter*