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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! i loved it soooo much! it sounds as if it really was an episode of Inuyasha! i can't wait to read the next chap ^.^
~Alyssa
~Alyssa
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. I like how you threw us in the middle of the battle. This has potential. I'd like to see more.
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome! You really stayed true to the established personalities of the characters. Love how you ended the chapter with an element of suspense, always leave your audience anxious for more. I can't wait for the next chapter...
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bravo..Bravo! You definatly got me interested. Wondering how poor Inyuasha is going to get himself out of this one. Can't wait for the next chapter. Are you sure you are an amature writer? You wouldn't fib to us would you?
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok they keep getting better! its like i NEED to read the next chap, and i can't wait to ^.^
~Alyssa
~Alyssa
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!!I love it!! It was great!!!! Hurry write moreI wanna see what happens!!
~~Love yaz babe~~
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~~Love yaz babe~~
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!!I love it!! It was great!!!! Hurry write moreI wanna see what happens!!
~~Love yaz babe~~
~~Love yaz babe~~