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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter...I like the way things are progressing. The only thing is i thought it was a little short for my liking at least.
But other thatn that it was awesome. please update again soon!
But other thatn that it was awesome. please update again soon!
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for updating....Keep the good work and please update as soon as you can....
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There are a few problems with spelling/grammar, but I'm not sure if it's due errors or if it's a problem with posting. Btw a spelling correction here, remove the h in whine and you have what you were actually aiming for, wine ( just letting you know for future reference ). Keep working at the grammar and spelling, and you'll be even better. You spin a good yarn here so far, and I like it. Nice twist with the background. :)
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!! UPDAYE SOOOON PLEASE!!!!!!!
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story alot ^_^ Please update soon!
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story so far :] I can't wait to read more.
<3
<3
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey nice story.
please update soon.
I can wait
please update soon.
I can wait
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was really skeptical about reading this, but after I did, i realize that it is very... well, captivating! very interesting story line, i can't wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter!
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One of the best stories im reading so far!! PLZZZ CONTINUE!!!!!! as soon as i saw this story it had caught my eye and i just had to read it and so here i am!!!!!! UPDATE SOOOOON!!!
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like update soon