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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is dark, angsty, sexually charged and HOT!! I absolutely love it!! *coos* Lovely writing throughout every chapter!! Great job!!
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when you read this story it makes you wonder of your own sick pleasures that you keep locked deep within yourself... i have read and i like! i'm flawed... i find this story to be hot! as one might say and i question, is sesshoumaru goin to get some anal loving? and is there going to be any 3-some!!? and is naraku really going to let them go??? these as some questions that pop in my mind!!! good story, i really do enjoy reading please update as soon as possible! thanx u!
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First off, I love this story. I love the plot and the smut.
But there is one little detail that I find to be rather jarring. Twice now you have referred to a "moon" as being a day when it should be a month.
Other then that, looking forward to the next chapter, keep up the good work.
But there is one little detail that I find to be rather jarring. Twice now you have referred to a "moon" as being a day when it should be a month.
Other then that, looking forward to the next chapter, keep up the good work.
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pls dont take this the wrong way but, Im disgusted, appalled, nervous, angry, turned on, in shock, wigged out, helpless (whatever you choose to do to them I cant help them), and positively amazed at your talent. Godamn! Fuck! Wow! I really dont know what to say except for you to really upload that chap ASAP! Pls hurt me more with your fic!
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAHHH!!!!!!!No!!!!! You wouldn't damage his face would Ya? Great chapter!!!
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, update soon!
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bad, Bad Rinseternalsoul. That is just so wrong!! I hope you get the next chapter out soon.
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, thanx for explaining. You have finally cleared up one mistery for me, so thanx again! ^_^
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ugh! NO!! EVIL CLIFF HANGER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sobs*
please update soon
please update soon
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your fic so far, great work. I can't wait for the next chapter.