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for To Be The Alpha

by Ilana

person bettychan
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it.
person Eiko
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! that was great.
person C-chan
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I most say that this was an unusual choice for me to read b/c I normally don't read yaoi stories, especially ones that involve incest. But, I know in the mind of a dog there isn't much, if any, disgression when it comes to mating. It's about dominance and who's the alpha when a pack is involved. With that in mind for Inuyasha and Sesshomaru, I decided to give this fic a try. And, not that I'm an expert on m/m relationships, since I am female, I think that your love scene for Inu and Sess was pretty good for a first attempt at writing yaoi. I know I couldn't have done it.

Anyways, I guess I should say my favorite part of the whole fic was the end. Inuyasha and Sesshomaru should have known who would be the dominate one in their three-way relationship, and it wasn't going to be either one of them. LOL Who's the bitch now? 'Not I,' says Kagome. haha.

Well, good story. It surprised me that I enjoyed it. You have a good writing style, and I look forward to reading anything else you write in the future. I'd like to read a Inu/Kag fic, if you ever feel like writing one. Kagome yelling at Inuyasha to 'sit' in the middle of their little tryst by the well was priceless, and I think you could write a humourous lemon for the two of them. ^_^ ja!

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