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This is a fic that I would love to read once finished. That way I can read the whole thing. Its the cliffhangers in stories like these that kill me.
(psst) this means I like it

that was very interesting you should wright another chapter

damn, it is SO about time!! good for inu! Kagome is being ridiculous. I hope you make her suffer. She has it coming! Let the revenge begin. A word though about your style- it's always better to show what words are thoughts and which are spoken. It just makes it clearer for the readers.

Wow, I had no idea I would get reviews so quickly. Thanks so much for reading! As I posted, I wrote this in response to a challenge that I thought sounded cool. I was going to leave it as a one-shot, but now I think I'm definitely going to have to add more chapters! This was actually one of my toughest fics I've written-I had a hard time writing as Inuyasha, a guy, so if any of you guys have criticism or suggestions, let me have 'em! I think next chapter might be from Kagome's POV. Anyway, thanks for the reviews!

This is an interesting twist to the standard "Kagome sits Yash, Yash grovels for forgiveness theme." Please continue soon so I can see Kagome's reaction.

wow great story so far I would love to read more.. so you know what to do, update soon please.

LOVE THE STORY. IT'S GREAT. HOPE YOU FINISH. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

I only have one thing to say... THANK YOU INUYASHA. It's about time you walked over that bitch. Don't get me wrong I like inu/kag parings but she can be a bitch some times. Also, I like the way Kagome played Inuyasha's feelings. Brought back memories of my dead ex. *sad smile* but no worries. Keep writing K?!! =)