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for Making Things Right

by inufan625

person mel
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love how you ended this story it was so sweet and loveing. i just love happy endings:-) anyway as for your other storys (Emergence) sounds like the one i would be most interested in. they all sound good really but the one i would be into would be that one. Ok. Anyway loved your story bye:-)
person @N0nyU$
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey great story
u should write a story as to wut happens after their honeymoon
a whole new story
person chanda
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, congratulations with the completion of this story, it was very good. As far as the next story you post I cannot make up my mind they all sound very promising. I assure you which ever you decide to post, I will definetly read. Until the next story.

Chanda
person *lithium88*
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries while jumping for joy*... and so it's finished. ^_^ great work, as usual. i can't believe it's over thou, this really was one of my most favored stories! glad it ended well, and i'm also glad that u are continuing to write!! *cheers for Inufan* Woo! Loved it! anyway.. haha... before i get emotional or something.. i wanna thank u for posting so often and for writing a great story. haha i wish i could have ur talent! anyway... hmm.. all the stories seem to have kool plots but i guess i would have to go with um.. Escaping Umbra or Emergence! ^_^ anyway, once again Great job!! t.c. can't wait to read more of ur stories!
-lithium*
person Anon
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww i love it that they marriend that way ur story is so intresting and im saddend that its almost finished now that i just found it but as much as i dont want it to finish would u please udate soon^^
person SakuraNeko
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::claps loudly:: Bravo! Bravo! Thank you for the wonderful story!
person Anon
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
unfetterd sound like a intresting story i love reading stories in which inu n kags get somehow seperated but find themselfs bk to eachother those storieds always show how strong their love it and if that story is ne thing like making things rite i bet it'll be an awsome story too^^
person @N0nymUS
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
VERY VERY GOOD
this by far is the best inuyasha lemon i have read
and i still havent read all of it
person jules
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I am one of those that read and don't review mainly due to the fact that it seems like every time I review the story is then discontinued (I swear I don't leave nasty reviews)...so, since this one is now finished, I can review :P

Truly AWESOME story. I adored Inuyasha as he was in this timeline and as a full youkai...had to skip the chapters where he went back to normal (gah! don't see how Kag stands him like that) - lol. Again, this story was AWESOME and the LEMONS juicy :)

Your frequent updates are appreciated and I sincerely hope you continue to do so. I wanted to vote for Emergence, I always like a good 'Inu needs to realize what he has' story. If you promise not to quit the story, I promise I will review (just don't want other readers to come after me because my reveiws seem to be cursed).

person SakuraNeko
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.o ::twitches and swoons::....................
::girl pokes at her w/ a naginata:: Vea: Um, this would be a 'please update soon'...... I think..........
@.@ ::twitching on the floor::

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