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by inufan625

person Lithium88
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
....NOOOOO!!! por que!?! i can't believe it's almost over. when i first found this story, i loved it! i couldn't wait for ur updates, but now... it's ending! -_- .. oh well! glad u had fun writing it! i had fun reading! ^_^ great story, as if u need to be told, but i'm telling u again anyway!! can't wait for the 2 last chapters! Hope they're both a great way to conclude this pants-defyingly sweet story! and sry for my impudence, haha i just really liked ur story! anyway, once again great job! t.c. ttyl bye!! ^_^
lithium*
person Mikah
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HI there! just found your story today. i loved it! hook, line and sinker.. great story. i've read all 33 chapters and i just have to say, you have done an amazing job! -cheers for Inufan- WOOT! can't wait to read the completion of your marvelous story. til then, adieu! -walks away, still cheering for Inufan- Woot Woot!

~mikah~
person gina
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok first i have to say sorry, i didnt' read and review as i went along. i found your story late.. and read all the way through!!! OMG!!!!!!
person gina
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i didn't finish sorry 'bout that too.. well ok OMG!!! your story is amzaing!! really please i can't wait for more!!!! i love it!!!! =)
person AmberEyez
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o_O blink - lemons lovely lemons - and a good plot line, too. nice development / continuation. more please !
person HMPrune
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am duly ashamed - I have been following this story avidly, but have yet to leave a review... Sorry.

This is a really interesting premise - canon, yet not quite, AU, but not really. Somehow you have managed to write it well, keep it interesting and keep the characters true to themselves. You've also kept track of a lot of different threads and made it all consistent.

I really thought that you might have missed something when Inuyasha (now without his modern memories) said something to Kagome about Kouga - but then you explained it. Amazing!

Anyway - I'll be sure to review from now on - great story - wonderful updating (for which I truly thank you!) Keep it up!
person lithium88
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sneaky.. sneaky... not really, hah. i'm just really oblivious and at the same time, an overthinker. so the youkai she helped wasn't kousotsu... oh well! ^_^ sad that the old , shy, pouty inuyasha left, but i'm glad that the one from before has returned. boy.. was chpt. 27 a glass full of Lemonade. haha. anyway... glad that u're gonna keep updating everyday til ur story is complete! *tear* thou i can't believe it's gonna be over in... 8 chapters!! *sobs* por que?! sry.. hyper, anyway.. no dice, can't wait to read how this all wraps up! t.c. , later!
lith*
person lithium88
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi ... again! ^_^ anyway finished reading chpts 24-25. sweetness! and i bet.. just bet that the youkai she helped is ..kousotsu... but maybe not.. anywyay it's great that u're updating so often!! ttyl, t.c. bye!!
lith*
person lithium88
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sobs* that's soo nice!!! no one's ever dedicated a chapter to me!!!! but i didn't do it for any dedications, i love ur story!!!!!! it's so great, and ur writing style is fantastic!! ^_^ glad i could at least give u some reassurance that this is a good story, thou i doubt u need any!! anyway.. sry i didn't review earlier.. had lots of errands and stuff... i just finished reading chpt's 21-23! it's so awesome!! i felt bad for kagome, but u did a great job portraying inuyasha as someone who is rather shy with expressing emotions in public. it fits his character well, it's good to kno that thou he's a 'tough hanyou', a shy, emotional side is hidden somewhere in there!! hope u continue updating!!!!!! til then, t.c. *hugs* bye!
lith*
person AmberEyez
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad you added more ! I wasn't quite sure where this was going, but it's been getting more and more interesting as you develop it -

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