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oh wow! that beginning suits him perfectly! no wonder hes so evil! poor guy! i feel sorry for him now! X.x

At first, I'll admit, I was a little reluctant to read this one. I passed over it several times. I am not the biggest Naraku fan, by any means. But now that I have read it, I am impressed. You have the ability to make me (and others) sympathize for Naraku! Or rather, for young Onigumo. That was a pretty harsh life for him... were you trying to explain how evil becomes that way? As always, your writing is amazing, and the story flowed smoothly. You could definitely be a professional writer. Thank you for sharing a story that made me actually contemplate the complexities of Naraku's character.

I was over here checking out the het. section, and of course seeing Onigumo (Naraku).*Hugs dark hottie*, I zeroed right in on this story. I did not even realize it was from an author, I have been reading another story from, until I finished it!! Wows, that was great!!! I always believed *still do* that there is a reason behind his darkness. I love the way you showed how Naraku was born. This was dark!!! *coos* Very well written!!! Wonderful job!!