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by dreamcicle

person Anon
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your story. I kinda felt bad for poor InuYasha when the thought that Kagome didn't really think he was amazing. I do like how he is enjoying tormenting her, but not in a terribly mean way. Hope to read more chapters soon!
person tinalyn
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi there! love story, hope u continue with it! update soon!!! ^_^
person lithium88
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi there! ^_^ just got thru reading ur story after stumbling across it today. i've read some stories with this plot before, but i like ur style. this story has potential! it's very intriging, and i hope u continue with it. i can't wait to see where the whole storyline goes, but i'll be waiting for updates... so.... Update Soon!!! t.c. bye
lith*
person animegirl93
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
***writes furiasly on note pad***"must kill orangy for leave me on a evil cliffy"UPDATE SOON
person chanda
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon.. I do hope you continue on with it.
person me myself and i
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sooo .. i found this story today and even if this kind of plot is used very often, i had to read it. i think you did a pretty good job, maybe the chapters are a litlle, a very little bit short, itīs fun reading it. i really hope you donīt quit it because there arenīt so much good written stories and even less that catch my interesst. please update soon!!! and donīt worry, the reviews will come ^_-
bye, krissi
person mel
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just came across this story today and i have to say it's really good so keep up the good work and update soon please.
person Anon
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please plaese pretty please continue to right, i realy like your story and i just hte to leave things unfinished.
person Anaidil
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter!!! I can't wait to read more chapters of this great story. Please!!!! Update as soon as you can. Keep up with the good work.
person Anon
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I'm looking forward in reading more. Please update as soon as you can.

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