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by BlackberryPatch

person rin136
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ros is now dead. Another human night and Inuyasha fell asleep! Good chapter!
person SP777
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know I NEVER thought I'd would read yaoi stories UNTIL I ran across some real good ones, like Inuyasha/Sesshoumaru, with actual plots that engage you...and yours does that.

I'm really anxious to see what happens next.
person Polka dot
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And all before breakfast, it's just like the army.
person Princess Sin
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, the story so far is wonderful. i'm dying to find out what
happens next.
person Sam
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVELY! Some things I love, in no particular order: Inuyasha's little nagging moments of doubt (weaker writers would neglect this), how the brothers are still -fighting- although it's evolved from swordplay into.. well... foreplay!, the soft tactile moments you create such as the kissing of palms and a hand on a chest over a heart... beautiful stuff.
"Maybe possibly a sequel"!? Yes! In the horrible event you change your mind, can you be bribed?
person blacknoise
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dayum, das' some good shit right there.

LOVES IT. So good. You know Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru quite well; their voices are quite fitting. Mm, I love a bottom!Sesshoumaru. It makes things so much more interesting. Ten points.
person lilmab207
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i just love your story I cant wait til you update again this one of the first stories i read with InuSesshy pairing i swear now that I read so many stories of them together i cant imagine any other relationship. Im thinking about writing my own story about them and I hope it will be as good as yours! I cant wait for your next update!!!
person Becky
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful I love this story I hope u continue it.
person PolkaDot
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've got to read all the inbetween stuff, but the last scene was lovely.
person rin136
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ros she choose the right side to be on. Yay!

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