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for Warmth In The Rain

by Mmoirai

person inuluva
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was really good for a practice! i mean... compared to other people... ur DEF a pro! ahaha
person HawkAngel
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
and you say that this fic is a 'practice lemon'... Wow... you did it great!... Perfect!!!

HawkAngel
person sakepolitan (not logged in)
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was hott AND sweet! Great writing! I harldy think you need more practice. ^____^

Thank you for your lovely reviews on my two stories. And I am ECSTATIC to be on your favorites list. Its a first for me!

Keep up the beautiful writing and firework oragasms!!! (god knows we could all use a little more haha)

person LalaMoon
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Here's your sign. Did good. Got any more?
person diamond
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great job!!!! really good for a first try.
person BrucesGirl
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your style of writing. It's very poignent and beautiful. Keep up the wonderful work. I think this was beautiful just the way it was.
person Des
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For practice, it wasn't too bad. Keep writing!
person Imae
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YUM!!!!!
person Nevaeh Azalea
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the lemon was GREAT! and it was only practice? wow. i cant wait to see more stories from you!!!
person Cassie
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow this story is really good the lemon is perfect and the scene is breathtaking in a lighting and rainstorm how romantic is that please continue.......^________^

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