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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhhhhhhhh no no u must keep going this is very interesting plezzzzzzzzzzzz more chap plezzzzzzzzz
schedule
July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its an alright story you just need to put in the quotes but otherwise its a good story and i hope you'll continue
ZEBZ
ZEBZ
schedule
July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LIKE it ok like it its humoruos and fun.UPDATE
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting idea, but I really have to agree with the other reviewer about quotation marks. It's torture to read a story without them.
schedule
July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh please update soon!!!
schedule
July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HEHEHE DIRTY!!!!!!!!! ME LIKE!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
schedule
July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ever heard of quotation marks? Use them.
schedule
July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u should use quotes