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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE NOW MAN THAT WAS HOTTTTTTTTTTTT!
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well done, awesome use of creativity. I absolutly love the song you incorporated, <3 Linkin Park. I hope to see more work from you, don't let your spark die!
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved the story plz put a second chapter up.
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a toothbrush a toothbrush come on be sereaus a toothbrush. it was good i liked it keep writing email me ^_^
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, this is a realli great story! hehe. u should def. put out another chapter and i don't think that there is anyway a person could've said that ur story sucked cuz it didn't! well i hope that the next chapter comes out soon!
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
he he he he he>>> DIRTY STORY ME LIKE
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhh! that was awesome! lol..you should DEFFINITLY write more!
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. -blink- It gives me... ideas... ^.^ Yes, please continue with the story. :D
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so awesome . I beg u 2 pls. write more. Thank u.
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO!!! Update soon!!! >< Or I think I might die... ok, I won't die... but it's really good so far. definatly keep it up! ^_^