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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't listen to this marron person, I had no trouble reading and understanding the dialogue, and it doesn't seem like the other reviewers did either, besides even if their was a problem which I don't think there is then to fix it would take away precious time to update the story, and I REALLY REALLY want to read the next chapter so lol please hurry!!! You haven't updated in like two days or so and this is like the story ive focused on reading right now, so i really need my fix, which means I need an update lol haha
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was ganna read this, but it's too much work! You've got a problem with the dialogue. You're not suppose to have two different people speak in the same paragraph... it causes for confusion. If two characters that are talking back and forth: each time the speaker changes, you start a new paragraph. I'm hoping you'll listen and fix it, from what I've heard it's a good story, it's just looking at the paragraphs/dialogue the way they are gives me a headache.
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yoiu're so awesome I love how you update :) Have to say what kagome asked of sesshoumaru was interesting, didn't see it coming, but why didn't she ask inuyasha? Well I hope you update soon and I hope more smuts ahead lol *winks*
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love ur story i can't for more i love that kagome likes it a little rough always knew she had it in her lol but anyway i was just finishing up chapter seven and thought u would like to know that ur story is awsome
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A most excellent story. Please update as soon as you can. I can't wait to read more.
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow , i just read alll 6 chapters here at work and all i have to say is ..........juicy lol i love it
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic, cant wait till they have a threesome, i wonder how inuyasha and sess are going to interact with each other when kagomes in the equation, please please please by all that is sacraligious lol, update quickly!!!
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! I like the stories where both brothers have Kagome. Yours is the best so far. I hope that you update soon so I know what happens next. Keep up the great work!