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for Always there

by Menomaru

person inu5
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
grate herry up with the next chapter
person D.J.
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it but it needs more so herry up and post the new chapter.
person a lost soul
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME! I can't wait until your next chapter. Keep up the good work ^_^
person Menomaru
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah welcome back ;D good to se a familiar face =D review away ^^
person TheBlackWitch
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you have an every without an e, and a meant without an a. Hey, how you been doing? Sorry, for not reviewing for so long. First, I wanted to find the rest of those attacks for you, then I forget which story it was. (sorry about that too.) Then I went to see my Aunt and Uncle (which was cool) and when me and my mom got back, I was trying to catch up on all the stories I read, and came across yours, and then I was like, this story seems familiar. So, I looked at it, and I was like, hey i remember this one. So, I've been catching up on it. I also did find a few more attacks, I can't remember where I put the paper I wrote then down on. And another sorry here. I look for it, and when I do find it, I let you know insantly.

post again soon
person a lost soul
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, each chapter kept me wanting to read farther. I so can't wait until your next chapter, and I hope it's soon.
Oh and keep up the good work^_^
person MaeveM
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_o What a cruel, cruel place to end a chapter! You built suspense quite well. Keep up the good work. (And keep it up soon, if possible, because I want to know what will happen to poor Kagome and her baby.)
person Menomaru
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha :D thx for all your reviws! Its been great and funny to read them :D so here's chapter 20 :D ENJOY! :D
person fuzzy - im a girl!
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ADD MORE! its reely good u kno, pleeessseee! >_< AHH! the tension! >=| Tell us wat happens next!
person Menomaru
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha got the ten thumbs joke ;) Funny ^^ Thanks for liking my story, im updating as soon as i can =) Love Menomaru

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