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December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have a lot of problems with your paragraphs. Only one person should speak per paragraph. The grammar rule is: Start a new paragraph for every new action, new point of view, or new person speaking.
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
are you going ot write another chapter? ^_^