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for Once Upon a Time

by inumom

schedule July 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG I loved this story like more than anything I have read before. I love the way your wrote it and I man wow Sometimes I was like wow didn't see that coming and I mean wow you are a great writer.
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was such a great story!
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ya i think only the criminally insane actually think inuyasha and kinkyh...i mean kikyo should ever end up together but if u kinda think about it they do neway i mean kagome is reincarnated from kikyo and part of her soul is in there so wouldnt that be kinda the same
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was truly wonderful!

thank you,
ginny
person Etaotn
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story so much!
It is really well written, fluent, very impressive.
I think the first part of the story (till the battle with naraku) is much more beatifull then the second. I didn't like at all the battle itself, I think Kagome should have been more.... "important". And also the "revelation" scene... it is not at all in character and even not romantic!!! :'(
But I think it is a really a very great fanfic!!!
Thanks for your work!
person chanda
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aghhh so close to the wedding I cannot wait please update soon.
person chanda
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love it, please update soon.
person lithium88
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey there!! just read all the chapters u have posted up so far!! it's a great story, and i love ur style of writing!!! *gets to excited and falls off chair*... damnit! *ahem* sry... ur story made me rather giddy, haha! ^_^ i'm also reading another one of ur story's.. but i dont recall the name at the moment... sry.. but i can tell u that it's really good too!!! i hope u continue writing!!! well i'm off.. t.c. write on!! bye!
lith*
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this so far and I can't wait for the rest to be posted.
person T
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that is a beautiful ending! u dont need to add anymore. u hav incredible writting skills but it is extremely hard to pull of a continuation of a story with such a great ending unless ur making a sequel (u kno, same characters, in the same position, a little while later, with a different plot [and evil]). but then again if u believe u can pull it off give it ur best shot, jus mabey u will.
Anywaz jus a friendly warning. looking 4ward to mor of ur stories! 5 GOLD STARS!!!!!!!!!!!!

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