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for The Captive Bride

by cyancat

person babe_galanime
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
continue plz. sess/rin rocks
person Anon
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I dun't know if I'vw reviewed ur story yet but I have read it and think it is awesome! ^.^! As for the name... Boy: Ryoku (means power) Girl: Kimiko (my fave Japanese name) or Chikara (strength) kk BYE! --Judo
person Sarah
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Since Ayame means " Iris" Kohana means " Little flower" i think its appropriate, since it will be a little baby Ayame. I also like Akina "spring flower ", Yuri "lily "


And if you decide that you wish the baby to be a boy, Tomo"twin", could be used. Then you could decide that the baby be almost an exact replica of Koga. Kane "tribute, warrior; the doubly-accomplished, golden; man, the eastern sky; beautiful" i liked as well. But... your choice. I have a lot more if your interested.
person evilducktape101
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*reaching for the computer screen* 3 days left...

by the way, you said it was based off the plot of your mom's old romance book...what book is it? if it is anything like your story, i wanna read it...
person Mmoirai
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Here are a few names I found that I like: *my favs*

Girls - *Shinju = 'pearl'*
Hotaru = 'firefly'
Ume = 'plum bloom' (devotion)

Boys - *Yasuo = 'peaceful one'*
Kaysu = 'victory'
Yuudai = 'great hero'
person Mmoirai
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoops!

for the boys: "Kaysu" should be "Katsu"
person kit
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you are allowing the story to progress. Sesshomaru and Rin are a mixed couple in the story but, it works well. I am anxious to see how Sesshomaru handles the news of fatherhood and how he learns from rin to be caring and trusting. I give the story five stars as I couldn't go to bed without finishing all you had written. As for a name for ayame and kouga's baby...Makoto is a popular name meaning truth. But, hey it is trully up to you anyway. Thank you for writing as I for one enjoy reading.
person poodow
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
two girl names:
Jasmine
Niji (means rainbow)

one boy name:
Tsuyoi (means strong)
person Mmoirai
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Also...

Gekkani = 'in the moonlight'
Niji = 'Rainbow'
Mist = 'Kiri', 'Enmu'
Color / Colorful = 'Teishoku'
Night / Nighttime = 'Yoru', 'Yabun'

First and middle name???? Niji Gekkani
Teishoku Kiri
Teishoku Kiriyoru

First name?? Kiriyoru
Gekkanikiri

Hmmmm....yikes this is tough!
person unknown
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi ther! love ur story so far! keep writing please! anyways, down to buisness. if it is a boy, which i hope it is cause then kouga can teach it sports and stuff, i think that he should be named Aki, yuki, or kyou. if its a girl then i think that she should be named aya. ayame....aya. fits kinda. or since rin helped them, they could name the baby after her, wrin. nah....didn't think so. ok. well, my 2 cents have been thrown in. enjoy. buy a cookie. and all that jazz. ~Later

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