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for One Broken Heart, One Lonely Soul

by xKikyoux

person tenechia
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awe I just love Inu/Kik together. They BELONG together. Good job! And I'm like you, I don't hate Kagome--Hate is such a strong word. More like, I can't stand her for being a jealous little idiot. If she was Kikyo 50 years ago she would have tried to kill Inuyasha too. *ahem* Keep up the good work!
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This story, is really good. I'm a fan of the InuKik paring and this was a good. story. Although i wish there was more chapters.
person Laichi
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm not a Kikyo/Inuyasha fan; I'm a Kagome/Inuyasha fan. Yet, I saw your story and I thought, "Why not?" and then I read it. I must say that you really showed the emotions both Kikyo and Inuyasha feel towards each other. It was... refreshing from all the many other Kagome/Inuyasha stories. ^.^() You did a great job, and I hope you write more!

--Laichi ^.^
person Spike of Doom
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was a nice story but i wishe you had expanded on it a bit more to include more interlud stuff and perhaps better dialog.. overall it was enjoyable read good job.
person Anon
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
<3 I love Inuyasha and Kikyou together its the only "canon" Inuyasha pairing i like (Inuyasha/Kagome is overrated and she's a winey bitch, Miroku/Sango is too rushed plus its poinltless he's ALWAYS gonna womanize and the only Kagome ship i can tolerate is Hojo/Kagome maybe Kouga/Kagome sometimes...)

Please write more Inu/Kik storys ^_^
person LilithGoddess
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Too short. It has potential though but it needs tension build up for it to work and the sex scene or lemon is too short too; sort of like"wham,bam,thank you ma'am" rather than the carnal union of two misbegotten would be lovers.
person Marina
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! it was great! I love it!
Congratulations ^^
Best wishes,
Marina
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lolz...kawaii
person haldbreed_gurl
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a story! It was a good lemon and it was realy sweet!
person Kikyou
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story and thank you soooooo much for your review on my story "Together for ever" that was my first story and you were my first review thanxs and I truly think if you keep writing you will become a fanfic master and like you told me don't turn on us Kikyou lovers for Kagome. K. (lol) keep writing. Luv ya!!! Kikyou

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