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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story, hope there'll be more.
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like how you're building up the plot. This was much easier to read this time. Update soon.
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon.
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this and I look forward to reading the future chapters. Please update.
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This looks original and promising. One suggestion is your formatting. There is no paragraph breaks, so it makes it hard to read. It maybe easier to copy and paste the text in, instead of uploading it. Update soon.