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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...that was a nice chapter not very deatiled and kinda short but still good ^_^ Inuaysha seems a litte OOC I think he probably would have shaken hands with hm but shown off by squezzing it really hard ^_^
Kourui
Kourui
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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm.... Getting Better ^_^ LOL I love Inuasyha! ^_^ Gomen nasi I had to putthat, nice job Inuaysa was a little more him slf in this one ^_^
Kourui
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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm Interesting, good chapter it was a little better ^_^ I wish the caracters names wern't so much alike though it makes the story hard to under stand ^_^ GOod job though!
Kourui
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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...Interesting...you do realize though that kagomes friends arn't soposed to be able to travle though the well ^_^ GOod job though ^_^
Kourui
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ur story is great, but you got to make it more discriptive.... Any way nice job....Update soon
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, just wanted to say that i'm lovin this story. it's really getting good. deuce.
-Dani
-Dani
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
excellent!! i love it..the half-lemon was perfect too!! i need more!!<33 pups
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Quick i am not a pashent person herry up with the story please
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah your back... good to see a chapter yes I'll take it, even though it was a teaser...lol
Chanda
Chanda