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August 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe I only just found this story but I'm glad I did. I really enjoyed this story, it's very unique, well written, interesting and suspenseful. I really hope this story isn't an abandoned one. I didn't check to see how old it is or when it was last updated and I'm almost afraid to look, afraid to find that it is long abandoned. I just hope it isn't and that I'll be able to read more.
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update soon please!
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very interesitng story but when is the next chap coming up?
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's quite an AWESOME star-studded cast you have there. *picks up jaw from floor* And there's more to come? I haven't seen any KH or FF characters yet. I'm afraid I would've died from fangirling if you introduced them all in one chapter. Bankotsu and Hiten's touchy-feely attitude with Kagome made me squee with joy, too.
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Riku and Kagome together made my brain explode from squeegasm. Kagome straddling Sephiroth = me dead.
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Raped Kagome makes me sad... and mad. Gang-raped Kagome makes me want to kill someone.
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kagome + Sephiroth = very gorgeous baby angels
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You almost always mistake your plurals for your apostrophes.
's = possessive
Hell's Angel = Angel of Hell
Hell's Angels = Angels of Hell
+s = plural
Hells Angel = Angel of Hells
Hells Angels = Angels of Hells
's = possessive
Hell's Angel = Angel of Hell
Hell's Angels = Angels of Hell
+s = plural
Hells Angel = Angel of Hells
Hells Angels = Angels of Hells
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You also mistake your for you're.
You're = You are
You're wrong
You're going to be sorry
Your = possessive (yours)
Your mistake
Your family
But I still like it... even if it has a lot of characters I don't know. Are they originals? I keep looking for the Reikai Tantei and Sephiroth instead. I like it better when the story centers around Ban, Hiten and Kagome too. :)
You're = You are
You're wrong
You're going to be sorry
Your = possessive (yours)
Your mistake
Your family
But I still like it... even if it has a lot of characters I don't know. Are they originals? I keep looking for the Reikai Tantei and Sephiroth instead. I like it better when the story centers around Ban, Hiten and Kagome too. :)
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Monkeys attacking leopards... I thought it was really cool! XD But I busted out laughing when I remembered that Kim Possible Movie where naked mole rats fought against monkeys. lolol!
I like this chapter because of Sephiroth. :)
I like this chapter because of Sephiroth. :)