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for Betrayal's Gift

by LdyMoon

person Twirly twirly
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so good so good. excellent job for real I can't say anything else. you need to update like yesterday!
person MIroku's Dream
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what to say...you totally took this story and turned it around I almost couldn't review because I'm so...shocked but because it was so deep I had to say something but I don't know what to say...Please I need to know what is going to happen I feel lost...post tomorrow, no tonight...what...your not going too...your so mean but I can wait til next weekend but please don't hesitate. Oh god don't.

Carmen
person joy
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
holy crap plz more theres gootta be more gaddamnit now!!!!
person Kougas rival
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved how you broke down their roles for Inu's life I believe tht was so insightful. This was a great chp.
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wows.. everything is heating up now. These last few chapters was very good and intense. Well the whole story is too.

Geesum-what a evil cliffy you left it on.--Wonderful job on this!

~Tainted
person Angel
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Give me more more more more more more more!!!!! I can't say it enough girl!
person Cathy
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my I believe this is an open mouth insert foot scenerio happening here. I'm glad I've another chapter to read.
person Cathy
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I kept wanting to scroll down and read more but you left it there! I had a wonderful thanksgiving and reading your story made it tip the scale to an even better one thank you. I look forward to next week.

Just for thought:

Can you beleive that it's xmas already? You've been working on this story for a long time and doing a marvelous job on it I might add! Thank you so much for this story your fan.
person Miroku's Dream
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh this was a good chapter and an evil evil cliff hanger I thinks it's the worst yet! I loved how you had Miroku and Kagome make up and settle all things. Is Kagome really going to die??? I guess she is you've been hinting to that since the beginning of the story. Looking forward to your next update.

Carmen
person Twirly twirly
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for putting me in the list of thank yous. Update soon it was so good.

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