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for Betrayal's Gift

by LdyMoon

person Anon
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update this story I noticed it on Media minor and then I realized that there are more chapters here and I'm blown away. Please update soon
person Miroku's Dream
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh that made more sence. I figured something happened to Shippo but now that I read it I was like "NO!" Than I reread the next chapter and everything fell into place. On the bright side missing that chapter didn't leave anybody or at least me all confused like some.

chpt 41
I can't believe that you finally told me what she wrote in that letter. It was so sad and I could understand now why Miroku was looking at her crazy. That's a suicide note good chapter as always. And the journal entry was something I could see her saying and doing. It was very realistic.

Carmen
person I am
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters I loved that I had at least three to read. Everything is so well written and you made sure you covered up any loop holes. Kagome trying to drown Hotaru that was deep. I was blown away what will you give us next?
person Kougas rival
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yo I know I haven't been reviewing in a while but I had to attend to some personal shit. But I did read when I had the time. I have to say that I am impressed this story is the hottest shit right now. I can't believe that you are just now reaching the climax and all this time I've been so damn worried. There is too much for me to comment on but I am posting this story under my favorites.
person chubbers
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aaaah it makes so much more sense now! cant wait for the next chapter!
person Tainted Dreams
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a very intense chapter. --I felt bad for Kagome and Miroku and what they are facing right now.

Then onto what Shippo and Inuyasha was dealing with.

Wonderful update! Thank you.

~Tainted~
person joy
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIIT!!! HOLY SHIIT!!! OMG! AMAZING GODLY DIVINE PLZ CONTINUE
person Miroku's Dream
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What can I say I was hurt for Miroku and Kagome. I was nearly in tears when Inu-Yasha was faced with the worst delimma in his life. I had to twirl around in my chair to get over it and keep reading. I know that makes no sense at all, but trust me I did just that. I loved it great chapter and I look forward to your update.

Carmen
person ldytrista
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Review for chapters 11-15
As I keep reading these chpaters it makes me feel like I don't want to stop because I want to read it more. So I anxiously await for time to read the next chapters see what their lives reveal.
person Angel
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy mayo batman! Did you just do what I think you just did???? Did you...kill...him??? And Sesshomaru what is it with his "Do it it's honorable" If I were Inu Yasha I'd say shut the fuck up! I felt so heart broken for Inuyasha and than to end in an evil cliff hanger AAAARRRGGGG I'm a twizzler I'm a twizzler!!!!

Update!!!!

PS sounds like you had a great time wish I had anime to watch for hours at a time.

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