AFF Fiction Portal
GroupsMembersexpand_more
person_addRegisterexpand_more

rate_review Reviews

for The House Of Lemons

by TheHentaiHarlots

person Kellie
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was freakin' hot. Makes me wish I was in the story. Keep up the wonderful work
person monecque
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You guys are on fire , fire i tell you.
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man the dog one was FREAKING GREAT!!! You guys really know how to keep a fresh, new and seriously twisted take on these stories and I adore them all. This was really hot and naughtly and I really liked how you kept in, how should I say, a more real slant, I really enjoyed this. Also how you had him introduce himself was very funny and the ending was cute too. The only thing I would note is that Sesshomaru (since Inu doesn't do dog) looks more like a Samoyed than a white German Shepard. Of course I am somewhat biased as I have a Samoyed and I think his cute white ears are exactly like Inuyasha's, plus the long white fur. Here is a link and tell me these cuties don't look like Fluffy except for the read eyes and the sammy smile. http://www.samoyed.org/ows/sledding.html
But I love what you gyrls are doing please keep up the good work I just adore this story:)
person InuGrrrl
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
**To Break a Curse**

That was REALLY good, lol. I started reading a smiliar story
on here (forgot the name) & both are really great (the other
one had no hentai tho). Well done & kudos for having the
balls to write such a fic.
person Luvspanky
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so very much! They give me VERY creative ideas. I think I'm starting to scare my boyfriend! Rin, I especially love your stories with Anubis. Could you do a threesome with Kagome, Anubis, and Sesshoumaru? I would worship you in all your greatness for eternity!
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As completely perverted as this may sound, I found 'To Break a Curse' to be one hot fuckin fic! Hat's off to my partner in crime for her wonderfully hentai mind!

Rin
person lia
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you two are great, simply great. i can't get enough of the stories. please continue to write more because there are readers that love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Evellin
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ladies!!! Well done!!!!

I love this whole idea of you two working together to put several Hentai one-shots together! What a great idea! I must say I love the whole Naraku/Kagome pairing. Yes, Naraku is a bad guy, but you can’t help but notice how H-O-T, hot he is! And he does have tentacles….that could prove very handy in some…:clears throat:: SITUATIONS! (By the way, the old-school tentacle Hentai was awesome!!!! LOVED it!!!!)
Well ladies, I am VERY excited for the next one-shot, I look forward to it very much.
I hope you both had a great Turkey-day!!!!
~>Evellin<~
person JazzyJazz
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Wow!! These stories are great!! I went back and read everyone. So I decided to just review the last chapter praising the both of you. These stories really are good. I mean if I had a big enough vocabulary word for them, I'd say it. But, no word I know would do any of these stories justice. MAGNIFICENT WORK!!! ^^ I hope one day to write a lemon as well as these. Sadly, I am but a beginner!! Keep up the good work!! Can't wait for the next chap!!! *~*JazzyJazz*~*
person sendosha
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*howling in response* That was great! Finally Koga had his chance, too and Naraku the voyeur! Just hilarious!

Age Verification Required

This website contains adult content. You must be 18 years or older to access this site.

Are you 18 years of age or older?