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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!! oh my gosh. i knew Naraku was going to try to rape her, i saw it coming but still...oh dear. and poor inu has to hear it. man...he's going to rip Naraku a new asshole, isn't he? damn. GREAT story, as always!!!!
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like this story it's very awesome!
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Agh you just ruined the story. Naraku walks up to Inuyasha and hits him on the head... How lame is that? 1. Inuyasha wouldn't have let him walk up to him. 2. Inuyasha would have reacted fast enough to doge or block the blow, especially if since he was already on guard. 3. Naraku wouldn't have just left Inuyasha there. Hitting him on the head with his gun wouldn't kill him unless Naraku shattered his skull.
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yippie, another chapter. it s great and so exciting. it s funny to read about shippo s old plan. :-)
hm... how it will end with naraku? bbbeleana
hm... how it will end with naraku? bbbeleana
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW. That is probably as original as it gets! I like the whole concept, but where's Sango? Other than that *crash* oops hold a sec...
Other than that, it's a GREAT FIC! I'm proud to say you've made it on my favourites list, which by far is probably a challenge to get on because I take my favourites SERIOUSLY. *bang, clatter* Sorry, obviously my doppelganger is running amok!
(Awkward Silence....)
(UPDATE! LEMON! LEMON! LEMON! LEMON! LEMON! LEMON! LEMON! UPDAAATTEEE!!!!!)
What? Why are you giving me that look? I didn't say anything!
Other than that, it's a GREAT FIC! I'm proud to say you've made it on my favourites list, which by far is probably a challenge to get on because I take my favourites SERIOUSLY. *bang, clatter* Sorry, obviously my doppelganger is running amok!
(Awkward Silence....)
(UPDATE! LEMON! LEMON! LEMON! LEMON! LEMON! LEMON! LEMON! UPDAAATTEEE!!!!!)
What? Why are you giving me that look? I didn't say anything!
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice. lots to read.wow. still loving the story, and really loving fluffles. i bow to the great protector. i see the problem already with Naraku brewing, but then again, it's hard not to. he's naraku. Anyway, yeah...great stuff. i think the marriage part between inu and kag was really rushed, but i guess when you know someones the one, you just know. the story is well done though, never the less. can't wait to read more. let's see how 'devious' you plan for naraku to be. i've seen some bad ass naraku's. i'm intrigued.
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey finally u updated!!! thanks..omg this was good UPDATE A.S.A.P
Thanks
Inuyasha Mate
Thanks
Inuyasha Mate
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn another story I was sure I had left a review for only to fond that I haven't. What can I say? I am really enjoying this fic so far and can't wait to see how the relationship develops. Kagome is a little ruder than I generally like, but it fits and I'm sure she'll mellow out a little once she get laid...lol
Anyway great work and I look forward to your next update.
Anyway great work and I look forward to your next update.
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YIIIHAAA!!!
I love this story... You do a great progress in this short time. Keep on your good work! bbbeleana
I love this story... You do a great progress in this short time. Keep on your good work! bbbeleana
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man...kagome's mom is havin some serious problems! poor girl!