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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No worries about this being your first fan fic.... you seem to be doing wonderfully! I really like the beginning of the story... and having stories without Naraku and Kikyou is a good thing sometimes :D
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the story is good cann you write more!? your really good you know what you doin.
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like this plz continue
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what's next? i need i know pritty plz with coco on top!!!!!!!!
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, nice beginning .keep it up though ne?
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Again... another great chapter... I'm really liking this story... I have this feeling that he used the jewel for something.... but hey, who knows? :D great, great chapter! :D
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like chapter too. GOOD JOB!!!!! Please update soon !!!!!!!!!
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its cool, update when u can plz