rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

like it so far, you sould do more

Saw the note on your profile and thought I'd use your review board to let you know that you can apply to the problems list and you can get the info you need to get back into your other account.

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Two things about your chappie:

*You need a disclaimer

*You could use a beta for punctuation

Sorry if this sounds kinda dry, but I have a really bad cold and feel really miserable. I will say that Sessy is my fave character. He's a god!

Snowfall