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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eee! First Reviewer Ever! Yay! Thank you for your review, you don't know how anxious
I was to see what others thought about this story.
I was to see what others thought about this story.
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well done for you first story. There were a few grammar errors but nothing too serious. You had the character personalities very well done and the angst was mixed in there nicely. The ending was very well done, not rushed or anything and having her remeber things about each of them was a nice touch to it.
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope that this is the final end!!!! The start is nice because I think her vanishing will happen immediatly too. Please continue.