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December 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOOW INU&SESS WOOOW
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
VERY good :D wow.. what a hott story!
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully detailed, and you have a nice style.
A few pointers: quote "both of his powerful legs wrapping around his brother’s waste as he thrust upon those tantalizing digits" you had a typo 'Waist' is a body part, 'Waste' is NOT something you wrap your legs around..... (Nothing a good beta won't fix =D)
Also, just as a tip, it is very considerate to define the terms used in the story at the end (or the beginning) for those who don't speak the language. I do have google, but other people might not want to take the time to look up the terms.
Other than that, it was a fantastic little story, and I am eagerly awaiting your next one. Thank you.
~Cory
A few pointers: quote "both of his powerful legs wrapping around his brother’s waste as he thrust upon those tantalizing digits" you had a typo 'Waist' is a body part, 'Waste' is NOT something you wrap your legs around..... (Nothing a good beta won't fix =D)
Also, just as a tip, it is very considerate to define the terms used in the story at the end (or the beginning) for those who don't speak the language. I do have google, but other people might not want to take the time to look up the terms.
Other than that, it was a fantastic little story, and I am eagerly awaiting your next one. Thank you.
~Cory
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
graet, get working on the next one
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it you have to write more please.
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you back! You write great Inu-sess fics! Is this a kind of modern day sequel to 'Brothers'? Anyways, I hope to see more of your writing in the future. ^__^
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was hot so very hot... MORE PLEASE MORE! I love Sessy/Inu stories and I wanna read more of your work with them two this was beyond AWESOME!
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Giggles* Smut like this is worth several reads. Well done! The relationship between the two is especially sweet!
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved it! you should make more. ;)
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thats awsome ^^ plz continue