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by Avarwen

person Weathered
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol, no no. You misunderstood me. The part where Inu Yasha is about to get raped, well, that's sad!!! Very sad! Poor InuYasha! But no, I meant that the beginning was amusing.

Lol, still a very good story though!
person Deity
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ANother amazing chapter. ^_^ And I liked your little commment; "To steal from one is Plagerism, to steal from many is research". That gave me a nice laugh. Well, I hope you keep up the good work (and updates) in the future. This story really is something. I like the plot, different yet the same. But you've made it all your own......sorry, I'm rambling on about what I'm sure, amkes no sense at all. ^_^ Well, as I said before, keep up the good work, and until your next chapter, Bye! ^_^
person Chibi-Porunga
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh the angst! *pounces around* Nothing seems to be easy for these two and poor little Rin. Another great chapter ^.^ I actually have a firned who will read over some of the things I write and give me his opinion if I ask for it. I feel safer that way, I suppose. Hope ya had a great holiday ^.^
person inufangirl007
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yea, some of us actually like to listen to the voices in our head. lol. nice chapter! run like the wind sessy! please update soon!
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, well, I've known to be wrong...

Anyway, i've beenj reading your fic for a day and a half, my kids won't let me do much with my own fics let alone read someone else's but I have to say that I love your fic! I'm adding it my favorite list right after my review.

I can't believe that Rin finally got the nerve to tell Lord Sesshoumaru about Inuyasha. I hope that he makes in to his mate in time before anything hurtful befalls Inuyasha.

Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

Nemesis ^_~
person Lill
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!

I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!! DUH! That's just so obvious!

ILOVEIT!

Heh...MELIKE! ^_^
person Crazy Fangirl 0098 Sesshy
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I adore it!
person Taicrazy
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As wonderful as always!
person uzamaki liliana
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH YOU HORIBLE HORIBLE PERSON HOW HOW HOW COUD YOU END IT LIKE THAT GAH WRITE SOON THAT WAS EVIL GAH HOW DARE Y OU FINISH IT THERE I SWAE IF YOU DO NOT UPDATE I WILL CRY AND LOCK YOU IN A DUNGON WITH SESHOMARU
bye the way I relly liked this chapter
thax alot for writing it
person SP777
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
About Chapter 14...

Good Lord, I was wondering how long it was going to take before Rin said 'Inuyasha is in TROUBLE!!!' Personally I would have smacked her upside her head and said 'out with it'. At least Sesshoumaru is on the alert...for a second I thought this chapter was about the New Moon.

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