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for Brothers Promise

by Ladyanimelover

person Greedluvr321
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was aaaaaaaaaaaaawesome!! lol! I loved their kiss! Thanxs for the great read, and I hope you continue! L8RZ! (^ O ^)/~
person inufangirl007
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwww! very fluffy ending! can't wait to read more! please update soon!
person tanesha
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love the story and the chapters are nice and long but what is naraku planning and what does he want inuyasha for?

in the next chapter there has to be a lemon because sesshomaru is going to bathe at a hot spring and inuyasha is going to folow being curiouse about his brother and still feeling the affects of there kiss.

he goes to the spring an watches as sesshmaru undresses and walks into the steamy water. sesshomaru notices his mates prescence and smiles. liking the fact that inuyasha hasn't taken his eyes off his body yet and he can smell inuyasha's arousel thick in the air. so sesshomaru decides to give inuyasha a small performance and he starts to stroke himself slowly to ease his aching erection. inuyasha looks on unable to take his eyes from his brothers member as sesshomaru strokes himself to near ecstasy inuyasha can't take it anymore and is going to leave when sesshomaru suddenly grabs him from behind ridding him of his clothes and pulls him into the water and starts to kiss him.

inuyasha moans and kisses sesshomaru back. sesshomaru starts to explore his brothers body and this elicits moans and wimpers from inuyasha. pleased that he is affecting his mate in this manner begins to stroke his hardend erection. moaning inuyasha thrusts against sesshomaru's hand sesshomaru says "so you like that do you mate?" inuyasha's only response is to moan and continue thrusting into sesshomaru's hand but sesshomaru pulls away and inuyasha wipers and then sesshomaru finds inuyasha's tight entrance and slowly starts to finger it and while entering him careful not to hurt inuyasha with his claws prods his opening and inuyasha groans in pain at the intrusion.

then sesshomaru finds a very soft spot and begins to rub it. inuyasha moans loudly and bigins to clench around sesshomaru's finger and inuyasha begs for more "sess please" moans inuyasha

"please what inuyasha?" wanting him to admitt that he wants him

inuyasha growls in frustration and decides to tell sesshomaru what he wants to hear as sesshomaru puts another finger in inuyasha's opening causing him to moan and thrash about.

"sess please i need you NOW" inuyasha pleades he mutters 'happy now' under his breatrh

sesshomaru removes his two finger from inuyasha's opening and positions himself then he looks at inuyasha saying "i'm sorry my mate but this may hurt at first" inuyasha nodds his heard bracing himself for the pain that is to come.

sesshomaru already wet from the warm water begins to prod inuyasha's opening and slowly the thick head of his member slips in with inuyasha grunting in pain. sesshomaru nuzzling inuyasha's neck saying soft relaxing words into his mate ear. slowly he continued to enter inuyasha inch by inch trying not to cause him too much pain. finally his member was sheathed in all the way.

the flesh around him felt like warm velvet pulsing and wet. inuyasha was tight and sesshomaru was large so it was a tight fit. snugly wraped inside inuyasha's warm velvet like opening sesshomaru waited for inuyasha to relax and ajust to him being inside. it didn't take inuyasha long to adjust to sesshomaru and soon he bucked his hips back telling sesshomaru that he was ready.

sesshomaru slowly started to pump in and out in and out of inuyasha,but soon the slow pace was forgeten and inuyasha bucked his hips back moaning "sess please faster harder" moaning sesshomaru's name.

sesshomaru obliged and started to pump faster and harder in and out of inuyasha's tight entrance.

inuyasha moaned for him to go even faster and harder and sesshomaru told inuyasha to hold on to to him and sesshomaru used his youkai speed and slamed in and out of inuyasha with a speed no human could match. pounding his mate into oblivion causing him to moan loadly and to hold onto him tighter. sesshomaru scensing that inuyasha's climax was nearing he pounded into him hared and faster sometimes going deeper and others faster.

inuyasha screamed sesshomaru's name as he climaxed his juices coating sesshomaru's member then sesshomaru climaxed inside of inuyasha coating his insides mixing with his fluides. wispering inuyasha's name.

they climb out of the water and lay on the grass the warm steam making a thick warm for keeping in the warmth of the spring. sesshomaru wraps inuyasha in his tale and pulls him close nuzzling his mates neck wispering in his ear. inuyasha burrows closer into sesshomaru's warmth and sesshomaru embraces him holding him close. sesshomaru scans for any demons and finding none he folows his mate into a deep restful sleep.

that's just my opinion and fantasy

great story btw

see ya round

ja ne
person Go Elsewhere
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Huh.

Sesshomaru asking for permission.

Well, that's something new to say the least.

Anyway, this chapter was well written and I enjoyed it!

Hope you update again soon!
person Ame
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love your stories! brotherly love between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru... *drool* lol. please hurry and get the next chapter out!
person angeluswilliam
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this fic so please keep updating it poor Inuyasha.
person gemini
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
person venus
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update asap
person Ally
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was a great chapter..I hope you can update real soon!
person Ano
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey! I'm lovin' the updates your giving. I'm not one for incest but this story is too interesting. I wish you could do a scene that Lust had his way with inuyasha. But then again, i don't want Fluffy killing lust. Anyways, great story and please update soon.

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