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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU FOR UPDATING IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!* biiiig hugs* time to read!
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LMFAO!! I loooooooove Lust!! He's aaaaaaaaaaaaawesome! Lol! I love your fanfiction and Sesshomaru's attitude at the end! Keep writing! PPPPPLEASE!!! L8RZ! (^ o ^)/~
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.. not as inticeing as I would have hoped for.. kinda boring.. kinda intresting.. I'm hopeing the next chapter will be better :)
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
excelent chapter can't wait to see who saves inuyasha or how he gets out of it but inu has to stay with sessh because their just sooooo cute together.
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well now... O_o I guess it just wasn't Inuyasha day.
Fighting fatigue, mate is molesting him in his sleep, wounds won't heal, horny demons making a 'pass' at him, & NOW spider demons. I guess that would be a typical Inuyasha day! :-)
But I have to say I loved Lust, he was fun. I hope you put him in there for comedy reasons. I'd hate for him to turn out bad.
Fighting fatigue, mate is molesting him in his sleep, wounds won't heal, horny demons making a 'pass' at him, & NOW spider demons. I guess that would be a typical Inuyasha day! :-)
But I have to say I loved Lust, he was fun. I hope you put him in there for comedy reasons. I'd hate for him to turn out bad.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So this lust guy... he's completely insane, huh?
He definitely has a death wish if he's stupid enough to kiss Inuyasha with Sesshomaru standing right there.
Anyway, this was another great chapter and I can't wait for the next update!
He definitely has a death wish if he's stupid enough to kiss Inuyasha with Sesshomaru standing right there.
Anyway, this was another great chapter and I can't wait for the next update!
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, don't you dare rewrite this chapter. i like
it. it was so much fun to read especially when
they met Lust (Seems to me someone has been
watching to much Full Metal Alchmeist) anyway, that
lust is a hoot. you should have him in your
story a while longer just to get under sesshomaru's
skin. like i said don't change a thing. it's great
as is. and i'm looking forward to the next chapter.
it. it was so much fun to read especially when
they met Lust (Seems to me someone has been
watching to much Full Metal Alchmeist) anyway, that
lust is a hoot. you should have him in your
story a while longer just to get under sesshomaru's
skin. like i said don't change a thing. it's great
as is. and i'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Review chapter 1:
okay i just had to review this before i read the next chapter, that last sentence of "It was wrong in so many ways…" just left me cracking up. umm.....i have no idea how i found it funny but it was hilarious to me - maybe i read it a different way?
anyway, i love how you have chibi chibi inu wif sexy beast sess ..... awww that was so cute - such fluff scene there. soooo kawaiii!!!
ahem, so i'll go on to finish the other chapter.
btw you wont write any non-consensual scenes that isn't sess/inu pairing right??
i love this fic too much for it to be contaminated by baaaad eggs!!
.....
i think i better eat some food or else i'll lose my energy -_-'
cheera!
okay i just had to review this before i read the next chapter, that last sentence of "It was wrong in so many ways…" just left me cracking up. umm.....i have no idea how i found it funny but it was hilarious to me - maybe i read it a different way?
anyway, i love how you have chibi chibi inu wif sexy beast sess ..... awww that was so cute - such fluff scene there. soooo kawaiii!!!
ahem, so i'll go on to finish the other chapter.
btw you wont write any non-consensual scenes that isn't sess/inu pairing right??
i love this fic too much for it to be contaminated by baaaad eggs!!
.....
i think i better eat some food or else i'll lose my energy -_-'
cheera!
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Review chapter 2:
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i spoke to soon.....well at least ya have a warning there first that was considerate of you [seeing as some authors don't; reading a great fic then finding out person gets raped without saying is horrible - damn that author i'll never get that damn fic off my head. btw it was a Naruto fic i was meaning]
but i'm still reading this, although there are some instances where your confused me a bit with your wording like ".....Inuyasha’s small legs around his waste." I think that was suppose to be waist right? And ".....from the rough kisses and bights."
oh yeah did ya mean 'deaf' in that sentence here: ....deft (sp?) ears?
anyway later
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i spoke to soon.....well at least ya have a warning there first that was considerate of you [seeing as some authors don't; reading a great fic then finding out person gets raped without saying is horrible - damn that author i'll never get that damn fic off my head. btw it was a Naruto fic i was meaning]
but i'm still reading this, although there are some instances where your confused me a bit with your wording like ".....Inuyasha’s small legs around his waste." I think that was suppose to be waist right? And ".....from the rough kisses and bights."
oh yeah did ya mean 'deaf' in that sentence here: ....deft (sp?) ears?
anyway later
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story looks very promising. Will keep a look up at the next chapter, or should I say Sesshomaru reaction? What will he do next? I definitely love a protective Sesshomaru. Keep it up!