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by mshutts

person dah
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol.. this was just pure lol. :D Shippo is going to be quite confused.. :P but that's allright.. because Sess finally found his mate, and Inu wants it too..right? I hope there won't be so many complications to them anymore.. other that Kagome.. "No.. it can't be! Inu I love you.. you are brothers!.. " and blaah blaah.. I wonder how Kag will take their mating? :D but.. I'm waiting for the next update.. I hope it's coming out soon..
person Rawben
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol!! shippo's gonna freak out. lol! i can just see him running back to the village to screaming to everyone that sess is inu's mate! lol... hilarious.
person Bibi
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi mshutts.
The story is just wonderful! The use of that most ancient of fertility symbols, the rabitt, to show that Inuyasha is developing female 'parts' is priceless. I'm afraid that I started to snicker and laugh when I got to Lord Fluffy's comment, "One more day until mating season." I was instantly reminded of days past when my father (and sometimes the uncles) went hunting.

To sum up quickly my leap of 'logic': you make note of the first day of the season; your gun is loaded with shot; shoot prey and bring it on home. Sooo, here we have Lord Fluffy. Waiting for the first day of mating season so he can shoot his load with a 'rabitt' and then bring the 'rabitt' on home. LOL!!! And then for his closing remak: ‘Be ready, little brother, this Sesshoumaru is coming for you.’ I hate to tell him but rabitts are damn fast little critters in the wild and I hope he has a better plan than just chasing Inuyasha.

Well, I'm off to read the rest now. Thank you for using what must surely be precious 'quite time' to write this story. Bless you!
Regards,
Bibi
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAYAY update some more once again very good!!!!
person Go Elsewhere
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Keep it up!
person Just a Fan
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I vote for both! ~_~ Yay for an update. Wonderful as usual.
person Demitria Miriam
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kyyaaa!! I'm so glad you updated! I love this story! Very good! I like how subtle everything is; not too rushed but not too slow and plenty of detail to that which we don't know and lots of teasing! Great job! Update again soon!

-DM
person Tryst
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sesshomaru and Shippo. Split the chapter between the two. Good chapter though.
person Fluffy
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I WANT MORE!!!!! *CRIES*
person maria
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey this story is getting interesting. keep it up. update next chapter soon.

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