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by inufan625

person Kaguya
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful!!! As inu hanyou nikkie said, this story is excellent!!! I'm soo looking forward for the next chapter!!! The meeting father-son was so well written.... GO GO INUYASHA!!! KICK THAT MAN'S @§§!!! GIVE HIM WHAT HE DESERVES!!
person beccapatty
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG UR STORY IS SOOOOOO GOOD! I really really hope u will continue with it .. and hopefully at a quick pace hehe I like quick updates.. I love what uve got soo far! its jus soo awesome! Please keep up the great work and update again soon!
person chanda
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful update, look forward to running into the ex...
person jodibetz
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So good, so far. Seems like a nice story. It would help if you add some descriptions such as what clothes they're wearing, How the places look like (some changes were bound to happen after 4 years, ne?). It would help the readers (like me) visualize your story/scenes as you see it.
person Diane
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really, really like this & can't wait for more.
person lithium88
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww, I'm very glad that you posted another chapter so soon. So I see Inuyasha has already entered the picture, that was unexpected. Well, I can't wait for your next update! take care
lith*
person Ren
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i *love* inuyasha and kagome together, hapless romantic that i am. i love the idea of it, it's so well-done; sad and happy just how i like my angst :) and you just know inu will kill the guy, what kid wouldn't like a dad like that, huh? heh
person inu hanyou nikkie
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
@.@ MY word!!!!!!!! That chapter was very good as well and thanks for answering some of the questions... sweat drops... I can't believed I whimpered for some hints... sighs... LOVE the Story!!! This will be a very good.. no excellent read.... I love how you had Kag and Inu react to meeting and the intro to Taro very nicely done!!! I found that to be very in character given the ages!! I was wondering how little Taro would say after meeting is father for the first time.. I did hope it would be a postive reaction more than if he blamed/questioned Inu for his not being there for everytime Kagome got hurt. Thank you for the postive scene!!!! This is great!!!! LOVE the story... Can't wait for the next update!!!!!!!!
person lithium88
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww, That was sad. Anyway, very well written, I loved it, as I love all your works. ... gosh I'm starting to sound like a broken record. ^_^ Well, I just wanted to say great work. The whole plot of the story seems very intriguing and I'm anticipating for what's next to come! So, once again... till your next update. Take care!
lith*
person Kaguya
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My god.... This story has such a good plot!! If it made cry just in the first chapter, I definatly want to see the other chapters!!! INUYASHA!!! WHERE DA HELL ARE YOU???? KAGOME'S NEEDING YOU!!!
Please update!!

PS:I think it was just a bit OOC Kagome marrying that euh... "other man". But everything else is great.

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