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by inuyoukai8

person Rawben
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh! poor girl!! great chapter! hm.. interesting enemy... i think they deserve a bitter sweet ending... or ..something. but how will killing them give toga a wish?? btw: great riddle!!
person Serena (Me)
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another cliff hanger??! Ahhhhhh!!.....well on the bright side, multiple Togas could be nice :P
person ladyhwk
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMN! Your good!!! I am absolutely LOVING this story! Looking forward to more!
person Beulah Page
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I started this last night after I finally finished Across the Ages...absolutely love it! I will never cease to be amazed by how often you update, and with such long, well written chapters (four of them since I checked, oh, 18 hours ago). I have totally fallen in love with Toga; he's an intriguing character with so many facets (and secrets). The similarities between characters, particularly Toga and Sesshoumaru, really add a lot to the appeal of the story, but there's significant differences to make things fresh.
person Serena (MeMoi~)
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You left it there??!! Oh my god no fair! lol, I'll get you for this. Update soon please:)
person Serena (Me)
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see another update.
My only comment for this chapter: I....love....Ippiku. Comic relief rules:)
person Rawben
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy cow, are you just writing this as you go?? 3 updates in a row! and they're soooo goood! hurry ryu! get yourself healed so you can save her!! :O
person Style
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey~inuyoukai8 you are incredible..write so much in a day. The conversation between Sesshy and his daughter is cute..cute..cute...Ayeka is lucky
I am wondering that the human male.... what is he going to do?
person MeMoi~
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It has been a little while since I've reviewed but I have an excuse, school and work sucks doesn't it? Anywho, the story is as great as always and I cannot WAIT for Aislin to get her sight back. Fun times ahead ~sighs~. lol, I love this story and its still my favorite, and two updates in one day?? What have we done to be so spoiled? :P I'll be back tomorrow as always. Keep up the greatness:)
person Rawben
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh... you just updated again. awesome! but damn! a cliffy! where the hell is he takin her??

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